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Ambra has arrived at an asteroid mining colony to buy her sister out of sexual slavery. But the price is much higher than she expected...

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Coming November 10th!

The COVER looks GREAT, can't wait to see just what you have in store for us in this comic, Daphne!!

ANOTHER great story Daphne, the art work is really great, I see that you too appreciate LARGE breasted women(The artist may have gotten inspiration from Daphne Sosen's tits, maybe not), in any case, still a very good story.

Can't wait for Chapter 2 of this one, Kudo's to all!!!

Nice riff on Birth Of Venus there too.

I don't know how widely my thoughts are shared, but here's my feedback: (And as someone else has mentioned in another thread, I don't expect everything to appeal to my personal fetishes, but just in case there are others like me, I want feedback out there for Daphne. After all, its not like I can't go back to classics like Beyond Rubies or St. Nicholas)

(1) Bodily fluids were way overdone. A one panel cumshot or a trickle of moisture (like in Beyond Rubies) is sexy. The amount used in this, however, seemed gross to me and was a big turnoff (as was the veiny penis).  I thought page 9 in particular had the potential to be incredibly sexy if not for that issue.

(2) The anticipation that I'd built up for this got popped a bit because the quality of the cover art was significantly higher than the comic. The artwork was good, but it wasn't as good as the cover. And so I read the whole thing slightly disappointed. For what its worth - I love huge boobs, I love the massive cleavage on the cover, but the boobs didn't look quite right in the comic. i'm not complaining about size here - I loved Drains, after all.

I liked this one: the style of the art does seem to fight against the nastiness of the story though.

Wow! Just, just, wow! Great story! Really liked the manga-esque visuals as well!

I liked it.  Hand-drawn art proves superior yet again. 

A little surprised by the to-be-continued, as the story seemed to be concluded.  Is there a third sister?  Will their surprisingly hot mom be visiting the mine?

I like the story and the artwork is well done, but this style isn't my cup of tea. I'd have probably liked it better with a different style of art, but I still appreciate it as a fine addition to the site.

I can see one more issue describing Ambra's time as a slave. Who knows, with any luck, at the end of her agreed upon time, her master might even ask if she'd like to be freed, and she can say no, and remain enslaved. :-)

One of the best openings to ANY MC Fiction I've ever read, period. I can't exactly place my finger on it, but I LOVED this one.

Sorry, I just had to give my feedback. Can't wait for #2.

Since this is my favorite it is too bad that it is on the occasionals/short runs log.  I would love to see more of this.  By the way, I disagree with the poster that complained about the body fluids and the veiny penis, I though both were really erotic and helped capture the Manga style well.

There is actually a reason for the body fluids: They're in space; things tend to float around more there...