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Title: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: Daphne on August 26, 2023, 12:03:54 am Arrangements are being made.
(https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/images/trigger_warning/i13/trigger_warning-i13-p00.png) (https://mindcontrolcomics.com/comics/trigger_warning/i13/preview) Script: Daphne • Line Art: Richard Rasch • Colors and Lettering: Octavia Moon Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: crazydorian on September 06, 2023, 02:32:45 am Another fun one!
Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3. Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it. Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: Sharque on September 06, 2023, 10:49:56 am Really hope we get another of these before the year is out. easily one of my favorite series
Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: Daphne on September 07, 2023, 09:38:59 pm Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3. Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it. Page 6 is Cherie... and I don't see an error there: CHERIE: Um, have you decided… um… THOMAS: Yes? Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: lancehunter on September 07, 2023, 10:32:54 pm I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas.
Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: macavity on September 08, 2023, 01:43:11 am I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas. Ah, the old ‘does the cover count as page 1 or not’ conundrum. Adobe says yes, Daphne says no.Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: lancehunter on September 08, 2023, 07:10:43 am I think crazydorian might have meant Page 5. The word-balloon for "Would you like to move in with us?" does seem to be coming from Cherie instead of (out-of-frame) Thomas. Ah, the old ‘does the cover count as page 1 or not’ conundrum. Adobe says yes, Daphne says no.It's one of those small, but recognizable, differences between the download-and-read-offline folks and us read-on-the-site folks. Basically our "Soda" vs "Pop". Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: crazydorian on September 08, 2023, 10:59:32 am Error noticed: Page 6 panel 3. Hannah should probably be reacting to what is being said, rather than saying it. Page 6 is Cherie... and I don't see an error there: CHERIE: Um, have you decided… um… THOMAS: Yes? Sorry about that, Daphne. As lancehunter guessed, I meant page 5. Title: Re: Trigger Warning #13 Post by: Daphne on September 11, 2023, 12:28:53 pm Fixed!
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