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Title: Bigger #2 Post by: Daphne on March 19, 2012, 11:06:20 am As his cock grows, Laura's husband's confidence grows as well... perhaps a bit too confident for her comfort...
(http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/bigger-i02-p00.jpg) Coming March 28th! Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: robbie73_ on March 20, 2012, 08:38:41 am Okay, Which is getting bigger, HER tits or HIS cock, next chapter will tell us, eh?? ;) ;) ;)
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: raven on March 21, 2012, 06:56:34 am I think the answer to your question is yes.
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: jmundt29 on March 23, 2012, 07:10:44 pm Is the answer A or B?
Yes. Those are the kind of multiple choice questions I hated in school. However, this situation promises to be entertaining. Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Vidor on March 28, 2012, 06:18:32 am Not posted yet?
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: stormrazor2000 on March 28, 2012, 06:38:36 am I had to use a direct link to get to it. I'm sure Daphne will get it fixed soon. :)
Issue 2 was better than the first issue, so well done to the Bigger team! I love how the wife's will is slowly crumbling as she accepts his use of other women. Good stuff. ;D Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Daphne on March 28, 2012, 07:25:57 am It's fixed.
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Garg22 on March 28, 2012, 10:27:01 am Nice job on this, but after that one SJI episode I have to make this comment. The Hypno-cock returnes!
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: blackriver77 on March 28, 2012, 11:18:29 am Wonderful story! Part 2 explained the picture of the woman kneeling. I kept saying
to myself..."it doesnt look like the office manager". :) Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Daphne on March 28, 2012, 12:15:57 pm Nice job on this, but after that one SJI episode I have to make this comment. The Hypno-cock returnes! Sometimes, themes cluster together. :) Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: mm257 on March 28, 2012, 05:42:44 pm Great job! Really love how the story is progressing, looking forward to the next issue!
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: robbie73_ on March 28, 2012, 07:33:53 pm Is it Kurt's COCK or his CUM that is controlling the women in his life, next chapter may tell us, perhaps "The Hypnocock" has indeed returned!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: grimtidings on April 03, 2012, 02:36:29 pm Likes:
Good intentioned start spiralling out of (or into, depending on perspective) control. Establishment of characters (faithful, intimate). Dislikes: Sharp drop off the jerk end for Kurt (too cocky too fast?) Challenging to tell one woman from the next (stream of consciousness narrative, maybe - plus art style). Definitely want to see more. The likes far outweigh the dislikes. I'd really like to see some pull-back on Kurt's fall into jerktitude. Maybe some tiny bit of guilt after he's messed up his faithful, supportive wife. You know, he wants to do something they used to love doing but all she wants to do is ... dance. Or she's responsible for doing something important (like her job) and stops caring - much preferring to be a "good little whore." Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: raven on April 04, 2012, 05:36:49 am lol, "cocky" :)
Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: jmundt29 on April 15, 2012, 07:37:29 am It's the stream of consciousness intercut that's most problematic.
This is another attempt at the "power corrupts" character arc, something I know PK really likes and the characters are (or were) better here than in Pwned, but again if we're going to do this arc it's important not to go from "That's a nice guy who lucked out" to "Someone drop a safe on that jerk's head" in the first two issues. If you absolutely must use this arc, please make it more gradual. Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Daphne on April 15, 2012, 08:01:52 am \This is another attempt at the "power corrupts" character arc, something I know PK really likes and the characters are (or were) better here than in Pwned, but again if we're going to do this arc it's important not to go from Um, PK may or may not like that kind of story, but I wrote it, and Blackstorm drew it... Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: Vidor on April 27, 2012, 09:31:16 pm This was a great story. Very hot. I love how the wife tries to get upset about her husband cheating on her but can't because the MC is too strong. That's one of my buttons.
Was a little bit confused by the last panel. I thought that scene was between the husband and the wife but the wife was nude and a character wearing a bra popped up. Title: Re: Bigger #2 Post by: tods1976 on April 28, 2012, 05:07:57 pm Agreed. I was a little worried about Bigger #1, but this one was great and I'm really looking forward to more.
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