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They're off on a road trip… and meet someone unexpected.

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Script: Daphne • Art: Mau Acheron • Lettering: George Zipp

so what note in this place? I like it

I ¡love! this serie.

I just re-read the entire series and was reminded how very much I like it. I fully approve of the faster cadence; thanks.

Waaaaaay back in Usenet days, I think I remember a multi-part never-finished story on a.s.s. or a.s.s.t.r called "My Inheritance." Similar plot but significantly different details -- including that the women needed to be triggered (a la "Trigger Warning") to recognize the son as their new master. I have some archives of a lot of stuff from those newsgroups but can't find that particular story. So, two questions:

1. Does anyone have a copy of it they'd be willing to share somehow?

2. Daphne: Do you remember that story? Did you, in fact, write it and this is your cleaned up (plotwise) version?

I don't believe I ever read that story! Different stories have different origins, and the origin of this one was the image of Stephen and Lucinda walking away from Charles' grave at the funeral. That image popped into my head, and I kind of built the rest of the story around it.

Would it be this one perhaps?
https://storiesonline.net/s/30094/my-inheritance

DINGDINGDING!!

The internet never forgets. Although a quick look shows that it's not as well-written as I remember, so maybe it forgets a little....

Many thanks.

She need to be fuck-up and up keep the place

Opinion of MC's dad continues to deteriorate...

Okay. I like this comic less and less. For something named "The Inheritance", it's a bit sad to see the main character being so openly ungrateful to a dad who's giving him everything (money, a place, connections, a whole harem). Something his dad has built for decades. The MC just spends his time berating his dad, while cruising through his dad's harem and giving lip service to his concubines. His old man was a much more proactive person and a much more interesting character (smuggler, adventurer, traveller, ladies man), I'd much prefer a comic about him actually as the MC shows how despicable he is in each chapter. 

I'm surprised (although not unhappy) that The Inheritance has proved to be such a divisive comic!

I don't think I agree. Charles was a totally absent father, sending checks and nothing else. Stephen's resentment of that absence is well-earned-- and all evidence thus far reinforces the feeling that the Charles was a real piece of work. (Oh no. A manipulative mind controller? How could there be such a thing?) Could Stephen release some of the women eventually (and possibly repatriate some of the stolen antiquities, if we're going to be fully moral about it)? Maybe -- but he knows that he doesn't understand what he's dealing with yet and is perfectly understandably rolling with the ... well, "punches" isn't quite the right word, is it?

I do think it's interesting that Stephen seems to feel like he owes the most to the "lower-class" women that Charles didn't want to be publicly associated with; note that it's the prostitute and the waitress he takes on the road trip, and not anyone from the university. The university staff is probably on the verge of losing their jobs, too, but it's only Mia he's paying so far.

And by the end of the story, the journey could well mean that a) Stephen learns the secrets of controlling and b) comes to terms with his legacy, and c) gains a greater understanding of his father's behavior.

Then again, y'know, it's just porn. "Happy endings" has a different meaning here. But as a *story*, this one is much better than most.

In Chapter 10, though, Daphne? More sex please. Ch. 9 was a bit necessarily exposition-heavy.

There does seem to be a lot of "oh my dad was terrible, gee, time to have a foursome with my sex slaves, but really, my dad was a bad guy."

Always my problem with "nice guy MC." I can just never square that circle.

This is pretty much my favorite story line on MCC. I've followed it from the beginning and I love the way it's going. I really like that we're exploring "just what does a good man do" in our kink.

The last three issues have really been pay off for what everything in the story prior has intimated. We're getting to see the curtain pulled back and yeah; it's not pretty, and that is great. Yeah Stephen's dad was a prick and he ruined lives, and now Stephen has to put paid to that.

At the same time, I really love how Lucinda and David's relationship is developing. She is in many ways both his muse and his goad.

Keep up the good work!

It's not really conducive to hotness.