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« on: July 09, 2012, 05:50:47 am »

A Girl (let’s call her Eden) comes back from a long summer break with her family to find her home town is now CONSIDERABLY different.

She first gets an inkling of this when her closest friend bounces up to welcome her home...and when I say BOUNCE I mean BOUNCE!!

Formally the friend (let’s call her Chastity) had been a shy, slightly geeky type who was as flat as a board and didn’t have much in the way of a figure....now she’s at least a foot taller (even without the high heels) has a sexy, curvy figure crowned by a pair of all natural Double G-Cup breasts, that she has managed to squeeze into a tiny bikini top and scandalously short pair of daisy dukes.

She also seems to now be almost supernaturally cheerful and energetic...as well as VERY preoccupied with SEX.

Eden is shocked, but manages to waive it off as her friend having “BLOSSOMED” over the summer and having let it go to her head...mildly disgusted with her, Eden heads into her house with her family to unpack...then through her bedroom window she spots the neighbour across the street washing her car.

The neighbour (lets call her Ms Winterfield) is in her 50’s but has always looked like a bitter, twisted 80 year old...or that is she used to; the formally bitter, prudish and repressive woman is out in the summer heat with a bucket of water and a sponge hand washing her car, in a Brazilian-style thong backed bikini no less...and she looks fantastic!?

While still “mature” instead of looking decades older than she is, she now looks decades YOUNGER; you could peg her as being maybe in her 40’s (MAXIUMUM) but she has a toned, sexy body that would make most 20 year olds weep with envy, with what can only be described a substantial RACK (though not as big as Charity’s) and J-Lo-esque ASS; all of which she has on full display, as she “washes her car” like something out of a certain type of music video.

From there it becomes a mystery story revolving around Eden trying to find out what has happened while she was away; the town was having a substantial economic down turn (i.e. it has been dying off for the last 50 years or so) but now seems to be in a positive BOOM, with all the vacant stores having found new tenant (but each new store has some kind of sexual overtone; it sells sexy lingerie, sex toys, straight up porn or simple takes the adage “sex sells” to the very EDGE.) The one bar and two restaurants in town are doing a roaring trade; but the bar is now a full blown tittie bar and the two restaurants have taken on a very...Hooters-like vide...

It seems that the changes started when it was accidently discovered due to some interesting clauses in the town charter that both prostitution and gambling are legal within town limits (which is weird as the town was founded by HARDLINE puritans) and with this revelation the towns people voted to take advantage of the fact by exploiting the SEX tourism industry to turn around the towns flagging economy (which is even weirder as the town as a whole has always been ULTRA conservative...one of the reasons that previous attempts to attract REGULAR tourism has always bombed) by turning the failed “luxury spa” just outside of town proper, into a legal brothel and starting to redevelop the old industrial section of town into a massive casino!?

Concurrent to this, all the women who stayed in town over the summer (and most people couldn’t afford to go on holiday out of town) have changed into GILFs, MILFs, Cougars etc while the GIRLS have all become various flavours of Babe, Bimbo, Hottie...or plain old sluts and skanks!?
Not that the men have escaped unchanged, with them all becoming buff, well hung studs...or probably more appropriately Man-Sluts.
Eden is of course more interested in those who HAVEN’T changed, as they are her main suspects; the creepy Goth girl (who will turn out to be a red herring, and team up with her to find out what is going on) the School Principle, the Mayor, the Sheriff and the “Big Money” family that built the Spa and where close to bankrupt when it failed, but are raking it in now it is a brothel, among other suspicious characters...

Of course as time goes on changes will start to occur to Eden’s family and allies (and even eventually to herself) making it into a race against time...

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If anyone does pick up this idea to use, my one request would be to give me a heads up so I get a chance to see the completed product...
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« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2012, 12:35:38 am »

*Sigh* I guess no one is interested  Sad

Tell you what, I thought I’d put up enough to make an interesting story, but I held back certain elements from my original idea as putting them out to the general public would sort of defeat their purpose...they need a “big reveal” to work...BUT they do make the over all idea better, adding at least a bit of twist to the whole scenario along with a bit of depth...so if someone agrees to make a genuine attempt at writing this story I will Message them privately with my “Super Secret Plot Points”  Wink

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« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2012, 01:02:48 am »

I think this idea has possibilities...it peaked my interest, anyway and I did read on (which is rare)....If you are looking for someone to write it why not ask PlutonianKnight? I will point it out to him and see what he says. You might need to let any writer know your "super secrets" though Wink
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« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2012, 12:45:20 am »

If the 'Knight would be interested in writing this, that would be great...and I would be more than happy to share my "Secrets"  Grin

Of course the more times we use the word "Secret" the more I am aware that the pressure for them to be GOOD "Secrets" is getting quite high  Roll Eyes
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