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Author Topic: By the Book #9  (Read 9132 times)
Daphne
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« on: August 21, 2013, 12:32:38 am »



Our hero seems to have found a helper...
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« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2013, 08:42:17 am »

This is one of the best stories you have published.  I hope there are many more chapters to follow.
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« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 09:32:52 am »

Serial recruitment in general is hot, and this story does it right.  Can't wait to see this big-tittied goth chick get hers as well.
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« Reply #3 on: August 22, 2013, 02:13:41 pm »

What I like is you don't abandon the prior recruits.  Their individual stories are all good so keeping them in the story line makes it more interesting.  Sometimes there is a tendency to keep adding new conquests and not develop the existing ones.  The Nikki/Katie relationship is a great example.  Curious what you have in mind for Annie and Karen??  Again, great story.
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« Reply #4 on: August 28, 2013, 11:17:30 am »

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Can't wait to see this big-tittied goth chick get hers as well.

Totally agreed.  That's been teased in both this and the previous issue, and the anticipation has been building...
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« Reply #5 on: August 28, 2013, 09:31:02 pm »

Fools. The Goth chick is a Vampire. Daphne is introducing her now so that when she gets tired of writing By the Book, the Goth can rip the MCer's throat out, and when people flip out she can point to all of the set-up and say, "What? you didn't see this coming?"

This is all classic misdirection. Muhuhahahahahahahahaha!
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« Reply #6 on: August 28, 2013, 09:49:05 pm »

No spoilers.
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