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Title: After the Show
Post by: Daphne on July 19, 2017, 12:58:45 pm
After the show, she spins a fantasy about what might have happened...

(http://mindcontrolcomics.com/covers/after_the_show-p00.jpg)


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: laguna85 on July 19, 2017, 02:49:01 pm
wow may be update on Stacked Deck ???
if it's Be Great


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Geo on July 19, 2017, 08:02:05 pm
I suppose this is the Unethical Stage Magician story you had in the works?


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: hereno on July 19, 2017, 10:23:40 pm
I suppose this is the Unethical Stage Magician story you had in the works?

"The stage magician would NEVER do anything unethical."


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Haight on July 20, 2017, 12:59:06 am
Glad to see Maxx's work back on the site!


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: dwcomics on July 20, 2017, 06:21:15 am
This could be interesting.  Actually, it would be an intriguing idea if the mind control actually was just a fantasy, not a fantasy being used to cover up what really happened.  Maybe she's dreaming about how things could've gone, then just as she's telling herself "that's not going to happen" she gets a call that says "do you want me to make you into a hypnotized sex toy?"  No triggers, no false memories, just a simple yes or no question.  Guess we'll have to wait and see.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Geo on July 20, 2017, 08:01:53 am
I suppose this is the Unethical Stage Magician story you had in the works?

"The stage magician would NEVER do anything unethical."
Yes master. The stage magician would never do anything unethical.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: dudleyd on July 20, 2017, 12:29:49 pm
This is looking most promising, give the cover.  Wednesday cannot come soon enough.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Haight on July 26, 2017, 12:22:19 am
Art here is excellent. Cucking angle... ehhh...


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: hereno on July 26, 2017, 01:01:54 am
Art here is excellent. Cucking angle... ehhh...

Formally it's not cucking, since the husband is unaware. Fwiw, I've always thought this was an underrepresented part of the fetish. Isn't taking a girl from another guy hot?

Loved this issue and the art.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: lifmcs on July 26, 2017, 01:39:45 am
That was all around excellent. Fantastic art that totally gets the entranced look, and the extra few pages showing her actually going to him really gave it that Emeril Touchâ„¢. I also liked the flourish of having her trigger phrase blacked out when she's telling the story, only to reveal it later on. Looking forward to your next collaboration with Maxx!


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Haight on July 26, 2017, 03:27:12 am
Formally it's not cucking, since the husband is unaware.

Perhaps. Though by my metric it has more to do with the unwillingness or negative emotion associated with it; "swinging" or "hotwifing" would be something else.

Fwiw, I've always thought this was an underrepresented part of the fetish. Isn't taking a girl from another guy hot?

For me, not really. I'm not trying to kink shame or anything, but to me, it feels like a really toxic thing to get validation from. I've been on both ends of that, and imho it's bad mojo either way.

Eh, maybe I'm losing sight of the fact that it's a fantasy. Either way.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Daphne on July 26, 2017, 07:29:25 am
The dials controlling fetish are extremely sensitive! It's one of the challenges in being a pornographer: Even within a specific fetish like MC, small details can make a huge difference.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: rdaneel on July 26, 2017, 08:11:42 am
I liked this story very much and the art was superb. Thanks a lot for this.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: shkspr1048 on July 26, 2017, 09:10:28 am
Anyone know where to find more of Maxx's work?


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Daphne on July 26, 2017, 09:10:58 am
Anyone know where to find more of Maxx's work?

The Canadian Girlfriend here, to start. :)


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: hereno on July 26, 2017, 01:53:32 pm
The dials controlling fetish are extremely sensitive!

Quick! Somebody tell the Permed guy.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: GodWilling on July 26, 2017, 02:15:10 pm
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Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: madboy7931 on July 26, 2017, 04:22:04 pm
Loved it. Love the fact the guy was also under post hypnotic suggestion. A great way to keep his woman as long as he wanted. I wonder if the trigger phrase only worked for the hypnotist, as I'm sure the phrase Enormous Boobs would be used at her a lot :) Overall, another great new addition.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: dwcomics on July 28, 2017, 06:54:23 am
Guess her fantasy was 99% right; she only forgot one thing.  Or would it be better to say two because instead of returning them, he decided to keep them?  That would make an interesting sequel, the showman trying to decide if he should keep or release his catch.  Good job on this one.


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: stretchgilbert on September 03, 2017, 10:58:20 am
I Love Everything About This One! The Storyline, And The Artwork Is Excellent!


Title: Re: After the Show
Post by: Kylaryn on December 14, 2017, 11:33:17 am
I'd love to see more adventures of the stage magician from the unknowning entranced slave's POV. This was great, really hit my buttons.